In response to Axis' presentations in chapel last week, i've edited the ending of "Idea 3" from my last blog entry. I'd like very much to show a more hopeful and pro-active view in response to evil. WE ARE NOT ALONE in this this battle. That is a fact, therefore i will state that fact by including a third major character - a common hero.
This common hero will notice the chase scene as others look at the floor or ignore it completely. She (not he) will literally drop what she's doing to go help the victim being chased down. The victim will be caught by the kidnapper and struggle, but she is not strong enough alone to defeat him. Good thing the common hero comes from behind and pwns the kidnapper in the face with a good-sized branch (or something of the like).
This is the general idea. I'll work out the details as i continue to storyboard and write.
In addition, i would like the victim and common hero to part ways in the end. They separate as human beings on each other's side, not as instant best friends. I'll slip a shot in there of the common hero dialing 911 and then walking away, but the main focus of the end will be the two women's eye contact. I want their look to display these thoughts: thank you and your welcome.
That's all so far. Ideas, comments, questions, concerns? Leave me a message :) Thanks.
Peace.
- T
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